User:GummyLeeches/MIPS Hole Fanfic/Chapter 1

(Hey guys!!!! This is my new fanfic about Mips Hole!!!! I really hope you enjoy and please give constructive criticims. i want my fanfics to be really good and it would help me a lot!! - the author)

Chapter 1
Sarah was sitting on bob-omb battlefield and looking for the child of Big Bob Omb. She was a phenoma reporter for Mips Hole and need to take notes to help find anomalies in Super Mario 64. she wrote down a few words in a note book. Until that is when she saw the White Eye Chomp instead of the normal Chain Chomp. She freaked out because this was never seen as often as the child of Big Bob Om.

(NOTE FROM AUTHOR: this first paragraph is awesome because i put elements from the wiki into it! i hope you like :)))) )

sarah was actually scared of the Mario 64 anomalies though. Like, really scared she drew a picture of the White eyed Cohmp and went back to the calstle to show Jim.

"Hey sarah." said Jim

"Hi Jim I found the white eye chomp" said Sarah.

"WOAH REALLY THAT IS AMAZING." said Jim

"I KNOW JIM, RIGHT?!" screamed Sarah, leaping with joy

"we have to tell coolman and sigma about this sarah" aid jim

(NOTE FROM AUTHOR: there are spelling mistakes here but sorry i don't know how to fix them :))))))) dont worry i will make it up with a good story)

"sahah there is a problem" jim said

"oh my god. what." said sarah.

"rocket startup is coming!!!!!" said jim (AUTHORS NOTE: i dont rember his name)

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH" said sarah

END OF CHAPTER

(AUTHORS NOTE: ok remember what I said in the first authors note! constructivie crticism PLEASE :)))))) thank you)